Research into potential target audience: Feedback on first draft

To get the feedback i used the social media app instagram.
As well as the feedback i get from my teacher regarding the state and progress of my first draft i thought that it would be a good idea to send the first draft to the target audience as these would be the people that would watch the movie if it were to be released so it would be a good idea to see where they thought there were good aspects and also aspects which needed to be improved.

Overall i am really relieved with the feedback from my target audience as it seemed that they enjoyed the trailer as a whole. The positives from the feedback also put me at ease knowing that i was on the right track with my trailer and had some good areas with it including the sound and the editing and the story as a whole. However as you can see there was some feedback for how i could improve the trailer some i knew myself like finishing the trailer as a whole and some that i didn't know and so in turn helped me out a whole. The improvements were as followed:

• Shorten the studio canal scene as it seems to just fill up the time and just leaves the audience waiting for it to end. 
• Working on the start scene and the narration to make it more professional and complete. 

So as well as the feedback that i receive from my teacher the feedback from my audience really helped me out alot as they gave me an insight into my trailer from my own target audience.